This is very lovely, Ovn! Again, try levels in Verve, in case you haven't yet! [Ctrl]+[L]
What makes this a bit awkward, I think, is the hair and how it somehow defies gravity, hehe, but also, actually the rim lighting on here, which takes away some of the great power you have in here sketched pose. If you wanted to think of a photography setup, you'd likely put a reflector behind the left of the camera to give here more front lighting to bring out here curves, you know. That way you would emphasize more of here form and therefore pose again. She is gorgeous and very cute. No doubt you could bring up more of that again!
Other than that, fantastic colors, beautiful sense of illumination in the entire environment AND a great style, as always!